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Is deep space silent?
Amid the revolving spheres.
In perpetual night.

Or does God whisper?
Echoing across light-years vast.
Filling the void with song.
This poem was written for the :iconprojectdfc: December Form Challenge 2012 :[link]


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This style is the featured form for December 9th of the DFC Challenge. Here is a description of the form:

    The Sedoka is a Japanese form. It centres around the
    idea of Questions and Answers. The syllabic count is
    that of haiku (5,7,5) and there are 6 lines, 3 in each
    stanza. The content can be of any theme but one
    must question or mention something in the first, and
    then either contradict or answer in the second. It's all
    about leaving you guessing and making people think.




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Boias Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013

Really great !


"Painting is silent poetry and poetry is painting that speaks"

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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you very much!

 

Well said. I never thought of it that way. :)

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Boias Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013

It was a quote by  Plutarch (Greek philosopher) . I like the similarities in both arts .

Here is another nice one .

"Poems are paintings you don't have time to do. Paintings are poems you don't have colors for".

You got a really good writing  skills ! Thank you  my friend ! Cheers !

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brietta-a-m-f Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. I agree with your assessment that this is the best. I'm impressed! Really impressed!

Interestingly, I have heard that, even though it is a vacuum, there is a constant noise in space. And it has characteristics similar to music. I can't remember where I read that, it was one of the many obscure articles which my dad showed when I was little, but remembering it adds another dimension to your poem.
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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you! Thank you! :D I'm dreadfully sorry that I failed to respond in a timely manner.

 

It seems I've heard of that phenomenon also. I want to say that it was represented more as...static-like sounds, like a 'white noise.'

 

This piece was a classic example of: "Wow...that came together really easy."

 

Cause I tell you what, sometimes it just. doesn't. flow. :shrug: ;)

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PuppyPal1000 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It is amazing, certainly worth the DLD!:heart:
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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very kind! :D Thanks Nicole!
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulations on the DLD, this piece is fantastic :heart:!
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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! :D I'm so glad you like it.
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.
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