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April 12, 2009
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This was shot in the Thumb Area of Michigan

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^3wyl Dec 12, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah, perspective indeed!

I really like how the path just carried on until you can't see it any more. It's interesting how we go past the beech, past the water and into the great unknown, in a sense...

It's a small shame things aren't positioned totally in the centre. I also feel as if the angle is a bit tipped and that the quality of the shot could be better as well.

In the right lighting conditions, you could turn this piece into black and white and make it really stand out... or rather, make the bench in the middle there stand out as the main focusing point, like.

The place provides you with a fantastic opportunity, anyway. The atmosphere is pretty cool and it does have a film like feel to it, I suppose. :)

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just take this as a critic, because I'm unable to write one.

nice shot and composition, and the awesome perspective, the first thing I noticed from this picture. the beautiful blue of the sky and sea mixed very well with the sand and the platform(or bridge? please comment) colors. perfect timing, the picture is shot in the morning so it's very pretty.

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*Blacksand459 Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the critique. It is actually a platform going out into Lake St.Clair.
I'm so glad you like it.

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thanks for taking that for a critique. Lake St. Clair? where's that?

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*Blacksand459 Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
On the NorthEastern side of Michigan,USA. Its one of the Great Lakes.

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1 John 4:19 We love because He first loved us.

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"No speed of wind or water rushing by
But you have speed far greater..."
~Robert Frost "The Master Speed"
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